- portfolio website: adequate -- interesting background!
- basic exercise(s) --
- project utopia: something that should be pursued -- not go for the
quick gain -- sustainable choices -- highly participating society -- proper
education -- rules are guidelines -- trust --
- mood space(s): overfishing -- excellent visuals!
- final project: overfishing -- include in final project(s)!
- documentation/essay(s):
remarks: promising, and with potentially an interesting contribution
from your background, realize your dream (I would say, following your utopia)!